literature

AOTB Chapter 1

Deviation Actions

CDThorne's avatar
By
Published:
141 Views

Literature Text

With all great nations comes a great tale. The tale of Equestia is no exception. Thousands of years of fighting war after war left the once great land in ruin. Though even the fall of their great leader Celestia was not enough to break the ponies of Equestia. They did not fall and they did not falter. Instead they turned the pain of their loss into power which they used to burn away the chains of oppression that held them back from their freedom. And from these ashes came hope. To this day no pony knows what had happened to their once great princess. Even in the mists of spaces thousands of years later the followers of Celestia still hunt for her, waiting to greet the true ruler of Equestia.

A lone pony stands stareing though a window into the deep, dark abyss of space. The large grey hall he stands in wields silence like a ninja would a dagger. Still, careful and ready to vanish in a instant. The cold air biting away at any-pony that comes within its grasp. The only fragrance in the air originates from the blade he wields on his hip. It smelt of death and war. Bitter in taste but somewhat relaxing to those who understand. The ponies fur was a faithful blue with his mane draped in brown. He wore a metal shell which would anchor his life and kept him safe from the hazards of the once great land of Equestia. The suit was coated in a more harsh brutal blue, with the undertone of blood still staining it from past battles. Upon his nose sat a pair of tinted glasses. Engraved on the rim was the words "for Celestia, for the order and for freedom".

His long tail twitched as the silence was shattered by the thumping of hooves approaching. A tall pony with light tan colored fur and a long brown mane with a blood red stripe running down it stopped beside him. "Hello there" said the tall pony. "Good day sir. Main technician Woodchip I presume?" replied the shorter blue pony. "Why yes, you are S1 if I am not mistaken. May I ask how you know my name?" esquire Woodchip. "The name is CDThorne sir and I know who you are because no other pony is brave enough to approach a S branch unit without a very big gun or failing that a very pointy stick and a tank" explained CDThorne. They a brief moment of silence enclosed. "So why would one want a very big gun to address you or your teammates?"Enquired Woodchip once again. "Because sir it means they are about to die" he replied with a grin on his lips. "Ha good to know your on my side then. So your first day on the oblivion I hear, so you from Equestia?" Woodchip asked whilst stareing down to the planet bellow. "No I was born on the Kestrel in a lab. Monthraxs was born up in the mountains of Tamriel. Tyler in the Unicorn academy on Woompa Island. Jordan down in the goatlands of Nuluc. Jack in a back ally in Devon and Scorpiontorn was born in Ponyville". "Ponyville you say? Poor lad, that place was not the same after the wars". Once again silence descended upon the hallway.

About a hour those two spent looking out into the darkness of space. Just watching the the universe drift away. "So you seem like you have spent a while on the Oblivion, left any-pony behind?" asked CDThorne "My wife, shes a nurse back on Arcadia, not a day goes past that I don't miss her. Three years its been since I last saw her". A disheartened Woodchip replied. "Me and the others spent all are days in those god forsaken labs since we were dragged into this war. We where taught not to love. Only how to kill another pony for the good of the order. Don't let that fool you though, we have hearts, and we will never turn are back on our home. This ship is now are home and its crew is are family. So lets say any guests better learn some manners before entering the  domain of Celestia. Or else they made need to visit your wife for some stitches". Proclaimed CDThorne as he raised a hoof to Woodchip. "Well then welcome to the family, oh and don't worry Im shore the armory holds some toys to greet any unwanted guests with". Yelled woodchip with a grin on his face as he shaked CDThornes hoof in unite. "Lets go meet up with the rest of the crew shall we?" enquired CDThorne. But s he said this a message blurted out of the intercom "ALERT ALERT ALL HANDS ON DECK, THIS IS NOT A DRILL, MONTHRAXS HAS TAKEN MY SWEETS. I REPEAT MONTHRAXS HAS TAKEN MY SWEETS". CDThorne put on a embarrassed grin as the two left to go find the others.
This is a draft run of the first chapter of my fan fic, if all goes well then I will upload a half decent one tomorrow in which Monthraxs has a little brawl.
© 2012 - 2024 CDThorne
Comments1
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Vector-Brony's avatar
excellent. I like the little refence to Nurse Redheart